Month: October 2017

100 Word Challenge 7

It was the night before my birthday in 2015. I was laying in my bed thinking about my birthday party. I was so scared, not just because it was my birthday ,but also because of monsters. I got,so tired that I fell asleep dreaming of happiness. Then, I woke up because I thought I heard a noise. I went back to bed still dreaming. I woke up again and starred at the door. Then I saw someone went out the door. As the door slammed , I knew that I had to do something ,so I went out to the living room.

100 Word Challenge #6

One day there was a girl name Alice. One windy day Alice went to take a walk in the forest. Alice has been  walking for a while ,so she wanted some cold fresh water. Suddenly,she heard water coming down like a rainfall. Alice ran to the noise of the water. Then she look down and saw 2 blue boots floating in the cold water. Alice got scared of what she saw ,but she was interested. Alice walked closer to the water and then picked up the boots. Alice got more frighten and drop the boots.Alice ran quickly home happily scared.

Student Blogging Challenge 2

This week I am going to tell you 4 good comments and why.

Comments and why:

The first comment was to Maddy on her About Me.

Comment: Hi Maddy, are you playing on a football team?                                                                                                              I wrote this comment because I notice that she really love football ,but didn’t mention if she was playing  football.

My second comment was to Ruby on her About Me.

Comment: Hi Ruby, I also like my family and kittens.                                                                                                                     I wrote this comment because I find things that she likes the same things as me.

My next comment is to Lily on her About Me.

Comment: Hi Lily, I also really like to swim and don’t forget to put a t in the word still. Also, nice story.                           I wrote this comment because it sounded interesting and I like her way of writing it.

My last comment was to Ava on her About Me.

Comment: Hi Ava, I love how descriptive your story is and don’t forget to put punctuation.                                                 I wrote this comment because her story started out really funny.

In conclusion, these are my 4 comments.

100 Word Challenge – Week 4

One day there was a case that was not called in to the detective, but a veterinarian. The case was a dog was blind he kept accidentally poking his eyes and he looked at the bright sun. The veterinarian  had to take several tests and x-rays to make sure he didn’t injure any other parts of his body. The veterinarian said sadly that he had to where glasses. The dog would walk around and people would make funny stories about him. One of the hilarious  books are call ,” And the Dog with Glasses .” The lonely dog live sadly ever after.

100 Word Challenge – Week 3

One day there was a case that a detective was called in.The case was that someone think that they saw a purple crocodile at the swamp while they were on a tour. This case was too difficult for the detective ,so now the case in the professor’s hand. The professor went to the swamp and carefully observed the large green swamp. The professor found the scary crocodile. The crocodile had a half twisted tail. The amazing professor finish observing and found out that this crocodile has been eating to many grapes. The professor went back to his office researching happily.